The model is gorgeous and the pose is perfect. I like the composition and the Dutch Tilt crop. The angles create a nice movement of the eyes across the image. I could see a little wider crop, maybe to include the model's feet (admittedly I have a bit of a foot fetish), but I don't particularly think it detracts in any significant manner. I do like the way the subject is lit and the effect that you were attempting. However, I would like to see a little more detail in her hands. I think this would be possible without ruining the artistic effect of the lighting. Regardless, I think it's a very nice image.